Bad Choices

This is the first paragraphs of the book I am working on.

Gary wakes up and he can l his head pounding thinking about what happened last night.  His memories are coming slow or not at all.  His first memory is meeting up with friends after he had went out of his bedroom window. He remembers  John gave him a cup of something and told him to drink it and he would fly to keep from looking stupid he just drank it that is the last thing he remembers.

While he lays there he could hear his brother making his way to the bathroom.  Being two he likes to bounce off of the walls so every time he did it sent a sharp pain through his head. “I better get up before my mom comes looking for me.” He says. Climbing out of the bed Gary realizes his clothes are wet and have the odor of beer and sea water. He quickly grabs a pillow case and takes off his wet clothes and puts them in it.  Gary makes the bed and hides the wet clothes in the closet.  Putting on his robe and grabbing clean clothes he quietly goes to the bathroom and opens the door and steps back; his little brother is sitting on the floor playing with the toilet paper.

“What are you doing?” He yells.  Jimmy gets up and runs out of the bathroom. Gary closes the door and locks it. He sits his clothes down and goes over to the shower and bends down and turns the water on.  When he stands up his head starts to spinning next thing he knows his world goes dark.